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Subordinate clauses

It was a bright cold day. The clocks were striking thirteen.Winston’s chin nuzzled into his breast . Winston made an effort to escape the vile wind.Winston Quickly  slipped through the glass doors of victory mansions.Winston didn’t move.Winston quickly enough to prevent a swirl.Winston gritty dust from entering along him.

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  1. Christopher Waugh Avatar
    Christopher Waugh

    You’ve done well here. The last few sentences need a little work: Try to break these up so they all work (as in , make sense) as sentences on their own:

    Winston didn’t move.
    Winston quickly enough to prevent a swirl.
    Winston gritty dust from entering along him.

    Let me know if you need any help!

    CW

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