John is going to get into detention unless he is good.
Manchester united need a win because they need to stay top the league.
Manchester united lost the game without Rooney (he had an injury).
John is going to get into detention unless he is good.
Manchester united need a win because they need to stay top the league.
Manchester united lost the game without Rooney (he had an injury).
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The second example is great, Kayden, but the first one has a problem because it has what is called ‘mixed tenses’.
It begins talking about the future, but then you say “he was good” which is in the past.
Try reading it to yourself and see what you can do with the word ‘was’ to get the tenses correct.
Mr Waugh
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