Kayden's English Journal

The atmosphere lound sometimes soft,
People clap or roar
The ball goes in the ball goes out.
Athletes runs after gunshot
Sweating at end of each sport,
People in tears of joy.
The wicket broke by Alastair cook,
The crowd went wild.
AT the the end of the you are pround of what you have done .
And don’t let anyone bring you down.

What did you like about my poem and why?

YOU are ready to that challenge
Your heart beating as an eagle
Everyone’s mouths open looking at a small boy
LOoking down at its enemy .
THE water saying “jump don’t be a scared”
He can smell that clorin
Biting there nails they worry
His mum feels sorry
He takes that last Goulp
He jumps
Splash!!!
He could feel that bubbly water
He wasn’t scared no more.
Clapped the people,

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