My poem

YOU are ready to that challenge
Your heart beating as an eagle
Everyone’s mouths open looking at a small boy
LOoking down at its enemy .
THE water saying “jump don’t be a scared”
He can smell that clorin
Biting there nails they worry
His mum feels sorry
He takes that last Goulp
He jumps
Splash!!!
He could feel that bubbly water
He wasn’t scared no more.
Clapped the people,

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    tyrese

    I like how you have used a metaphor ” your heart beating as an eagle” but how every you need to go through and correct the grammar on each lines.

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