It was a bright cold day. The clocks were striking thirteen.Winston’s chin nuzzled into his breast . Winston made an effort to escape the vile wind.Winston Quickly slipped through the glass doors of victory mansions.Winston didn’t move.Winston quickly enough to prevent a swirl.Winston gritty dust from entering along him.
November 18, 2012 at 5:22 pm
You’ve done well here. The last few sentences need a little work: Try to break these up so they all work (as in , make sense) as sentences on their own:
Winston didn’t move.
Winston quickly enough to prevent a swirl.
Winston gritty dust from entering along him.
Let me know if you need any help!
CW